An Operation of Promise

An operation of Promise

Mechanically managed

A mighty whale

It oozes

Lying on the beach

We sit together

Silent

Death sits between us

Laughing

We move in sync

Robotic

All smiles and teeth

Death sits behind your eyes

The hearth is cold

Though timber is abundant

No kindling is near

Death sits between us

All health and good cheer

This poem is about marriage. It is the end and no one is game to raise the inevitable. Romance is gone, change is desperately desired by both parties. It is no longer a vibrant living thing. The imagery is of a rotting whale carcass on a beach, it represents the marriage of 2 people who aren’t ready to admit that it’s over. It’s just a slowly rotting thing. It feels offensive and bloated. But no one knows how to be rid of it because of the enormity of it. It therefore will slowly continue to disintegrate until there is nothing left all. Sometimes you just need an external voice to help you realise that it’s over.

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